Whenever I'm with you

I poured my heart and soul into this one. It took over an hour to write.

Whenever I'm with you
I don't know what to say
I don't know what to do
It happens everyday

Even though it's hard
I know what I must do
I will explain how I feel
Whenever I'm with you

My hands begin to sweat
My brain makes me act like a fool
It doesn't happen all the time
Only when I'm with you

I'm glad I got this off my chest
I wish you felt this too
But I thought that you should know
How I feel whenever I'm with you

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed it. It's my personal favorite. It is how I feel please leave some feedback.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Good job with strong rhyme & rhythm, which enhances your straightforward style, so beseeching with a lovelorn tone. Even tho your message is simply stated, it's very relatable & you use good examples to show how jittery it feels to say this to another person. I like the childlike essence, as if it's the first time being completely smitten! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[LittleBigDreams]

Thank you very much, I appreciate the kind words, yeah I went all out in this one.

[Cara]

I like it, nice rhythm Xd

[LittleBigDreams]

Thank you very much

[Tian]

The feelings your poem gives off really hit me, because this is really relatable...
Except I keep quiet haha. I wish I can also get it "off my chest".
Nevertheless, this is a great poem :)

[LittleBigDreams]

Thanks, yeah I relate to it and so do a lot of people

[Prometheus]

Nice work!,I understand what you feel. I think we've all been there. Keep up the good work!

[LittleBigDreams]

Thank you very much