Alone

I walk this path I have created
No one with me
Everything I've feared and hated
Why won't it let me be

I can't fight it
I won't hide it
No one seems to like my tone
Here I am forever alone

Author's Note

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Reviews

[z.chéri]

Short but effective! We all go through troubles where we feel as if we are alone but we really aren't! I feel like this poem can be added onto to show a story of someone with struggles. Although this poem, how it is now, is quite good and thought provoking the way it is! Good job!!
Also i have a poetry competition that i would love for you to enter! It ends in a couple days so i hope to see a submission from you! Keep writing! :)

[LittleBigDreams]

I will definitely join just let me know where to go and thank you for the positive feedback

[z.chéri]

Here is a link to the competition;
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/POETRY-%21/54629/

[LittleBigDreams]

Thank you very much

[Ms Paragon]

Short but to the point. Feeling alone is scary, yet taking that first step down your own path changes everything. Keep doing your thing and others are sure to follow! Nice work!

[LittleBigDreams]

Thank you very much

[sette]

it is a sad poem, expressing the loneliness and misery felt. I like the writing style, simple but complete. there is depth in terms of content and i like how it appeals, the emotion I mean towards us the readers.

[LittleBigDreams]

Thanks for the kind words, I deeply appreciate the good review. Thank you.

[sette]

you are most welcome