ladies and gentleman, step right up to see a real live broken heart.

you ought to win award for your talents
your trail of bread crumbs hurts more than your absence
so thanks for planting yourself everywhere
for the purpose of having me think you still care
but don't let me stop you, go on your wicked ways
cuz as long as i hate you, i know i'll be okay.

Reviews

[bbb]

love it amber.
i love the rhyming, it really adds effect to it.

[Wake Up!]

I absolutly love the last line. I like how the poem is short but holds a lot of feeling. Excellent job(: