Confused about you

Confused about you

A Poem by cArTeR
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about a girl..not chloe for once in my sad life.

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you are pretty.

you act cute.

your hair is long.

your legs are beautiful.

you are the sun.

but you are my friend.

i cant let you love me yet. 

© 2011 cArTeR


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I like the way you wrote these words. Great description and a excellent ending. Sometime we must be careful. When you cross the line of friendship. Can't go back. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow short and sweet nice poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ooh... Is this about who I think it is? Am I right? I've got a bad feeling...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it. It's sweet (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


aww ): This is sweet. I like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


short but really nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


short buht amazing:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short but fantastic. Fantabulous job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


you can really feel the inner emotions behind this poem, great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short but amazing! Great job:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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cArTeR
cArTeR

in wonderland, having some tea with the mad hatter



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after staring at this white space, im deciding to leave it blank. tough nubs if you wanted to know me. oh heck, my name is carter. im 19. your welcome. (my name on here used to be oh.dear.a.pengu.. more..

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