The awkward break up silence.

it begins after

you stop screaming

at each other,

and before you start

making out-

the awkward break

up silence.

its when shes silent,

and her make up is smudged,

and when your breathing

hard and trying

to apologize.

it's the worst silence

ever. 

Author's Note

its kind of crapppppy

Reviews

[iamkim]

crappy? you kidding? this is good! you have written it nicely and neatly! everyone can relate to this :) good job!

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

i love it its really good:)

[qaralynn]

nice write!! like it

[Short.Nerd]

I like it. I bet that is the worst kind of silence. Great job!

[halflives]

Very good. Short but deep.

[Midnight_Mystery]

you described that kind of silence well. Great job! dont be so hard on yourself

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

its not crappy!! again, stop being all insecure, or whatever :P you should realize, that with all the amazing reviews you get, that NONE of your poems could be crappy, or bad, or whatever!!!

Okay, so time for my actual review :P I do like this poem, it has emotion, but then again it's kind of distant. Great job :)

[Coyote Poetry]

There is never a easy way to separate. Anger and disappointment can make us sorry for the words we had said at the end. The ending is true. Silence can be a killer. A very good poem.
Coyote

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

its really good Carter...well done.

[Jill Wallflower]

its kind of not as bad as you think. I like it :)