An Empty Bathtub

An Empty Bathtub

A Story by cArTeR
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another chloe story. i love u :)

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  Rring, rring, rring.
  I roll over on my side groggily, open my eyes and grab the phone. I check my alarm clock. It says 1:52 a.m.
  Who the f**k calls at 1:52 a.m.?
  I stab the talk button with my finger nail and answer with a foul sounding, "h-helloo?"
  "C-carter", a small voice stammers. Chloe.
  I shoot up in my bed, now fully awake. She sounds scared. 
  "Hi", I say slowly. "What's wrong?"
  "N-nothing", she stammers. "Can you just come over now?"
  "Why?" I ask. "Did someone hurt you?" I hesitate. "Did Aaron hurt you?"
  "I just need you to come over. Now", she snaps. 
  "On my way", I reply.
  I hang up the phone and quickly get dressed.

  I walk to the front of Chloe's house and slowly knock on the door. "Come in", I hear her call through the door.
  I open the door and step in, and I don't see her anywhere. "Uh...where the f**k are you?" I call out softly, hoping Danny won't hear me.
  "Bathroom", she calls back. "No, I'm not shitting you can come in."
  I walk over to the washroom and open the door. She's sitting in the bathtub, fully clothed. The bathtub is empty.
  "Why are you in here?" I ask. She shrugs.
  "I just felt like sitting here", Chloe replies. "Come."
  I awkwardly sit down across from her. "It feels weird to be in a bathtub fully dressed", I say nervously. 
  "You can get naked if you want", she replies. 
  What? My brain kind of has a freak out.
  "A week ago you said you didn't like me and wanted us to be friends", I say. She sighs and picks a string on her frog slippers.
  "That's why I wanted you to come here", she says.
  I have no idea what she's talking about, so I just sit there and stare at her with the stupidest expression on my face.
  "I had an epiphany", she says.
  "Chloe, I love you and all but I don't really wanna hear you b***h about your period cramps again", I joke.
  She slaps my arm playfully. "An epiphany is a moment of sudden realization, ding wing", Chloe says. She doesn't remove her hand. It stays on my arm.
  "Well...what did you suddenly realize?" I ask.
  She looks at my feet. What you have a foot fetish?
  "I just realized that we should be together", Chloe says slowly. 
  This is all a dream, I think to myself. So I say the worst possible thing ever. "Really?"
  She nods her head and says slowly, "really."
  "So uh..are we uh...dating maybe I guess?" I stammer, getting my words jumbled up. She just nods her head and I nearly piss myself.
  "Okay so...your my girlfriend", I say. 
  "Yeah", she replies. "And your my boyfriend."
  We sit there for a second, staring at each other awkwardly until I ask the next question. "Is uh...Danny here?"
  She shakes her head.
  "Cool so uh wanna make out now?" I ask quickly. 
  "Sure", Chloe says. She leans in and kisses me. And it starts. 

© 2011 cArTeR


Author's Note

cArTeR
i know your so sick of all my chloe stories/poems now :P thanks for reading this one tho

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Chloe is a interesting girl. I like the conversation and the bathtub. When woman get something in their head. They will be bothered till it can come alive and she know the real answer. A very good ending to a very entertaining story. thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


another interesting write,i enjoyed it. great job! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


another interesting write,i enjoyed it. great job! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cute, Carter. Very cute.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is really cute!!!! and kinda funny :) great job!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


aweeee! this is my first time to read one of your chole stories and it's cute! i really love it! thanks for sharing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like it. its cute. your cute, carter. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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after staring at this white space, im deciding to leave it blank. tough nubs if you wanted to know me. oh heck, my name is carter. im 19. your welcome. (my name on here used to be oh.dear.a.pengu.. more..

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