I'm afraid

  i'm afraid someday

  you will take

  that leap

  off the train

  of life.

  i dont need

  to lose you,

  when i lost

  everyone else. 

  your all

  i have left.

  im afraid you will

  leave too. 

Reviews

[NickyGL]

Its sort but it has emotion, and a point. Its a great peice, and i enjoyed reading it. But i must say is sad too but a lot of people have that feeling when they only have that one person and your holding on for dear life, just praying they do let go or leave to. Nice job.

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

This is good, The fear of loosing someone is very hard. I am here if you ever wanna talk

[kieran cruz]

Short and amazing
It gets straight to the point
Great write

[Coyote Poetry]

In a life. We will lose many people. I understand this poem. When I was young. I try to keep a distance from people. Now with four kids and a wife. Family allow fear for their safety and well being to keep me awake at night. A powerful poem with a good message in the words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[halflives]

Jeeze, Carter, this is insane. It's powerful and truthful; it gets the point across completely. Gorgeous, my friend. Absolutely gorgeous.

[Frozen Snow]

sad and powerful, I like it

[Midnight_Mystery]

sad,powerful,and another nice write! great job :)

[misha]

This is sad and a beautiful write. Good job

[Short.Nerd]

Very good!

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I agree with Angie Diane, this is sad, but yet, really sweet. Great poem. Really great poem.