Be my dead girl.

Be my dead girl.

A Poem by cArTeR
"

idk

"
we would sit and share
a cigarette,
and talk about all the
things that make us
insane.

you can be dead
forever.
i will follow you
forever. 

your in the hospital,
your heart is slowing 
down.

i'm in my house,
drowning alone.

i will see you again
in hell...

© 2011 cArTeR


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cArTeR
:P

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Wow. This is very well written. And the strong sense of power if overwhelming. I can't wait to see you deliver some stories if your poems are ridiculously amazing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is good, I think 'hell' ruins it a little. It's such a soft poem and that's such a strong word. c:

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is good..i am a little confused but altogether its a good poem. reminds me of a movie...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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