Be my dead girl.

Be my dead girl.

A Poem by cArTeR
"

idk

"
we would sit and share
a cigarette,
and talk about all the
things that make us
insane.

you can be dead
forever.
i will follow you
forever. 

your in the hospital,
your heart is slowing 
down.

i'm in my house,
drowning alone.

i will see you again
in hell...

© 2011 cArTeR


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cArTeR
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Dead chicks are hot

Nice poem though, I like the kinda romance intertwining with something else entirely different

Posted 13 Years Ago


loved it, dark but intriguing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice job... very mysterious and dark... leaves me wanting more but a very good short poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it!! :) Very dark and wonderful! Awesome job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


full of nostalgia..:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful. I'm finding that I really like your short, concise writing. Awesoome job. I wish I could join you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good poem. It was well written and very powerful. I love the ending. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Woah. This is really well writen, and it's dark and powerful! Great job!


Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job, with a very strong ending, nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is..... Deep and dark, Good job

Posted 13 Years Ago



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cArTeR

in wonderland, having some tea with the mad hatter



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