Be my dead girl.
A Poem by
cArTeR
idk
we would sit and share
a cigarette,
and talk about all the
things that make us
insane.
you can be dead
forever.
i will follow you
forever.
your in the hospital,
your heart is slowing
down.
i'm in my house,
drowning alone.
i will see you again
in hell...
© 2011 cArTeR
Author's Note
:P
Reviews
Dead chicks are hot
Nice poem though, I like the kinda romance intertwining with something else entirely different
Posted 13 Years Ago
loved it, dark but intriguing. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
loved it, dark but intriguing. :)
nice job... very mysterious and dark... leaves me wanting more but a very good short poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice job... very mysterious and dark... leaves me wanting more but a very good short poem.
Love it!! :) Very dark and wonderful! Awesome job!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love it!! :) Very dark and wonderful! Awesome job!
full of nostalgia..:D
Posted 13 Years Ago
full of nostalgia..:D
Wonderful. I'm finding that I really like your short, concise writing. Awesoome job. I wish I could join you.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wonderful. I'm finding that I really like your short, concise writing. Awesoome job. I wish I could join you.
Good poem. It was well written and very powerful. I love the ending. Thanks for sharing. :D
Posted 13 Years Ago
Good poem. It was well written and very powerful. I love the ending. Thanks for sharing. :D
Woah. This is really well writen, and it's dark and powerful! Great job!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Woah. This is really well writen, and it's dark and powerful! Great job!
Great job, with a very strong ending, nice write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Great job, with a very strong ending, nice write.
This poem is..... Deep and dark, Good job
Posted 13 Years Ago
This poem is..... Deep and dark, Good job
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cArTeR in wonderland, having some tea with the mad hatter
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after staring at this white space, im deciding to leave it blank.
tough nubs if you wanted to know me.
oh heck, my name is carter. im 19. your welcome.
(my name on here used to be oh.dear.a.pengu..
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