suicide is on my mind

i said i was okay

i lied lied lied

i said i would be fine

i'm going to die die die

this is how i feel you see

this is what he's done to me

this is how upset i am

no i just don't give a damn

god and family and all

will all watch me fall

into my old sinful ways

and i will not wake up in twenty five days

start counting down

and smile, oh no don't frown

Reviews

[Brookell▲]

I love this and I can relate to it. It's always easier to read something if you can make it about you. Reading can be so selfish sometimes. Anyways it's great and well written.

[Don]

This is a cause for worries, unless you meant it to be a purging of your negative feelings. No one is worth taking your own life for. Be strong.

Do you have a support system (friends, family, teachers, anybody)? Someone can help you get through your problems.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Cathartic!

[Michael]

Honey, this piece is very poetic and well written, however, it worries me that the possibility was this may be a cry for help..I work on a suicide hotline, I see this type of writings quite often...if you need to talk message me...