Tea and a Princess

Tea and a Princess

A Poem by Apatheia

I sit with tea
Placed in my lap
My haired tied back
In need of a nap
But instead I'm reading
This lovely book
That takes me away
And I am hooked
There's a princess, of course.
At the far away land
But instead of being rescued,
She doesn't need a man.
Away from the dragon
Climbs out of the tower
Leaves her evil step mother
For once she has power
She hops on a horse
And makes her way in town
Where she's set on
Buying a beautiful gown
Because for once in her life
She's getting what she wants
Even it means getting it herself
And not from her servants
She wears the dress happily
And for once she is proud
That she did it on her own
Whether or not she was allowed
She gets a nice job
And a little cottage that sat
In the middle of the woods
But she's okay with that.
She never finds love
But she does find happiness
Because she doesn't need a man
To add on to her stress
She lives a nice life
Out on her own
With many adventures
And more to be known.
I sit with my pillow
Resting behind my back
Wondering if one day
I can be on that track.
My tea is now cold
But I don't seem to notice
Because I'm busy
Thinking of this bliss
I put down my book
And put away my tea
Because at that moment
Sleeps okay with me.
I rest my head on my pillow
Thinking gently to sleep
Because in the back of my mind
That story, I'll keep.

© 2012 Apatheia


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This is adorable, and very true. Women don't need men to be happy and satisfied.

There are a few things I'll point out: in the first stanza, haired should be hair. In the sixth stanza, between even and it, there should be an it. Lastly, in the second to last stanza, sleeps shold be sleep's.

Other than that, very well done! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Apatheia

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :) And thank you for pointing those things out. I'm not very good .. read more
Falling Leaf.

12 Years Ago

S'okay, that's what us reviewers are for! :)



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i really like this piece... nice job (oh and i love the rythem it has) yours truely Danielle (scripted)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is adorable, and very true. Women don't need men to be happy and satisfied.

There are a few things I'll point out: in the first stanza, haired should be hair. In the sixth stanza, between even and it, there should be an it. Lastly, in the second to last stanza, sleeps shold be sleep's.

Other than that, very well done! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Apatheia

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :) And thank you for pointing those things out. I'm not very good .. read more
Falling Leaf.

12 Years Ago

S'okay, that's what us reviewers are for! :)

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