Goodbye

With this s****y town

I've had enough

I'm ready to leave

I'll pack my stuff

I'm leaving the mountains

The snow, and the cold

Down to the beach

Where the sun is gold

Where everything's flat

And you can smell the sea

There's twisted grass

And some palm trees

With more people

And everything I need

Where not everyone

Is so full of greed

Grab my best friend

And a few pairs of clothes

And off we go

To reach our life goals

This is the new beginning

What we've wanted for years

Goodbye fake friends

And wasted tears

Author's Note

About me moving this summer. ^_^ I'm so ready.

Reviews

[Ees]

The poem is nicely written, but as for the content... be careful, it is just the same s**t everywhere, you may come to miss mountains and cold. There are false friends and greed everywhere you go and you'll always only be you.

Nice joyous saying of goodbye in poetry though!

[Apatheia]

I knowwww but I can hope. :p I'm glad you liked it.

[Ees]

Hahaha.
Okay. Enjoy your hope, I shouldn't have been such a buzz-kill.

[eatmills]

Bravo!!! What a triumphant write. It has a nice song to it. Maybe you should form a band in the new land lol

[Apatheia]

Hahah, maybe!