Does it hurt?

Have you ever felt so hopeless -

That it hurts?

You've been shoved and pushed around

Into the dirt.

You were cut from your last string

called love.

You're so worn out you swear you hear

angels above?

You're running out of what's left

of your longing.

All you can think about is 

Soon abandoning -

What you call life.

Author's Note

Just something short. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Daliah Valley]

It's something that almost everybody has dealt with. If not- they're lucky.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life allowed us to learn many things. One is to learn sadness and misery. Old wise saying. When you reach your lowest point. Only one way to go. Up. I like the honest thoughts and strong ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Apatheia]

Thank you. :)

[eatmills]

Loved this line "You're so worn out you swear you hear angels above?"

A nice sad write.

[Apatheia]

Thank you very much. :)

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

I like it! Your choice of words was great! :)

[Apatheia]

Thank you. :)

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

You're welcome :)

[Steven Cash]

real good, Hannah

[Apatheia]

Thanks. :)