Randomz!

Sitting alone and gazing around,

A new joy I now found!

A weird way to begin the day,

But, I find myself gay!

Harsh it was, cruel indeed,

To tell me off for what wasn't my deed!

But now I sit in bright sunshine,

With not one reason to whine!

Sitting alone and gazing around,

A new wake I now found!

Of clear skies and empty grounds,

The things you could do with no bounds!

Nothing to pretend,

And nothing to repent.

The fun to just sit and stare,

The fun of being nowhere,

The fun in rapping nonsense,

To none but oneself!

I sit now in bright sunshine.

With not one reason to whine!

Reviews

[Chris]

Hello... Welcome to WC. Mind if I ask what do you seek as a writer - here at WC?

[Aparna]

Hi Chris! I am here to get honest feed backs on my writing, and improve as a writer, as well read variety of stuff by people round the and widen my horizon. Also would like to contribute by reviewing others' poems and stories :-) Thanks for your welcome.

[Chris]

Is English (American or British) a second language?

[Aparna]

yup it is!

[Chris]

you are acquiring a good grasp. It does take time and practice to become proficient.

[Aparna]

thank you :)

[M.A.Rathore]

This poem telks us that there is a superb writer who has lighted his bright soul to beat the the drum all around the society.
Keep writing ..You are in the making... ...

[Aparna]

Happy that you feel so! Yes I indeed will :-)

[M.A.Rathore]

Thanks being so glad...keep it up...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i love these lines:
"The fun to just sit and stare,
The fun of being nowhere,
The fun in rapping nonsense,
To none but oneself!"

great work!!
nice random poem!!! :)
i liked it!!!
:)

[Aparna]

Thank you Pushkar, I greatly appreciate your reading :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.............:) :)