As expected

it's no literature....nothing except for the rhymes

my being born as expected 

living this life as expected 

some friends are there as expected 

no one cares as ........ 

spending time as expected 

getting sick of it as expected 

nothing new in world as expected 

no one cares as ........ 

will find a job as expected 

earn money as expected 

proud parents as expected 

no one cares as ........ 

get married as expected 

have kids as expected 

make them do as expected 

i Will care as expected 

get old as expected 

filled with regrets as expected 

die with them as expected 

no one will care as ........ 

Writing this as expected 

people reading it as expected 

nothing changes as ........ 

no cares as ........

Reviews

[Jeyanthi]

This reminds of me of a song All i wanna say that... when i first read this, it was a bit of comical (more amusing). Almost trying to figure out five stages of life, if you wanna something out of this recycle i suggest you spiritual life. :D
Sorry, am not good at reviewing as expected. :P

[Ankur Jain]

ohh it's definitely comical...
i think reverse psychology was at play when i wrote this...you know like how sometimes you tell yourself that you can't do something just to encourage you to do it...so i just wrote it as a joke to myself....
and i myself don't know how to write reviews....guess that makes us even...
i believe reading is more important than reviewing.......so thanks for reading it...^_^

[Jeyanthi]

Sure, that technique can boost our gut. :D
Thanks for making feel worthwhile.. yeah that neutralize us...:P
keep updating. :)

[Ankur Jain]

sure....!!

[Sami Khalil]

Expectations can be recipes for success or many exploitation.An excellent one...:)..........

[Ankur Jain]

quite right..!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome rightly...:).....

[Zac]

This is a great and very realistic poem.
You wrote a very good poem here. I hope to keep reading more

[Ankur Jain]

thanks buddy!
looking forward to see your work as well...:)

[Shubham Joshi]

you were born as expected
but u won't die the way you might expect.
some friends are there as expected.
but there can be enemies as not expected.
spending time as expected.
living life as expected,
but life will bring you adventures which you might not have expected
and there is always something new in this world, just start expecting!!
expect!

[Ankur Jain]

Well! expectations are mere constructions of assumptions based on individual's information and their imagination which may or may not be in proportion with their intelligence but really are highly relative to their apprehension of cognition.
I think the point i'm trying to make is that for you to expect me of expecting something unexpected is just as farcical as me to expect that there won't be any expectations...
Well! Apart from that,, thanks for giving some real thought to the poem...really enjoyed reading you...Ciao!

[Shubham Joshi]

well I just couldn't so many twisted words of yours but otherwise fine... you win.

[Ankur Jain]

Come on buddy!!
there's no winning/losing on this site....we're all here expressing our thoughts...bending them to our will...hoping to create something "arty" :D
thought inducing reviews like yours are making this site worthy of our time...^_^

[Shubham Joshi]

I never said anything about winning you just assumed...

[alf]

Hi Ankur Jain. Well that certainly sums up the cycle of life!!! Was it just a down day or a clown day. Loved this, alf

[Ankur Jain]

actually:) a bit of both.....it WAS a down day, but to turn it into a clown day = i did this :D
read moreactually:) a bit of both.....it WAS a down day, but to turn it into a clown day = i did this :D
u know..some reverse psychology ^_^
thanks for the read/review....

[SAIF ALI]

Experience and expectation has immense difference. We expect many thing in life but experienced very little. Though life is consequences of many expected things. ''As Expected'' sagaciously accomplish the extraordinary taste of a very ordinary life
It is clever to drag readers on the roof and make him/her to stand on the railing, but instead of pushing you give the reader his freewill. Filling the dots with unexpected is absolutely the similar thing. The uniqueness of anyone life is bury within his/her feelings. So life is unique for your feelings but very typical when admit your deeds. People are habitually bored to admire such sort of life who filled with expected aspect, no one will cares. They needs tragic and unpredictable life, which can't be expect and can't be forget.
Thank you friend keep sharing.

[Ankur Jain]

really???
you're going with this...
i "expected" more from you..:D:D

[SAIF ALI]

sometime many thing goes unexpected.

[Destiny Dreamer]

But U know while reading it .. I just felt like it's very Meaningful! So full of TRUTH! The truth that has never been told like that! Good Job! It's AMAZING! Enjoyed reading it! Again it's very TRUTHFUL!

[Ankur Jain]

thanks a lot!!
i guess it's the truth everyone tries to run away from...for their entire life..haha...or it's just a song a guy writes out of boredom :D
anyway thanx for reading it..^_^

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe :D No I guess it's the truth everyone runs from their ENTIRE LIFE! :D

[Ankur Jain]

Well, to each his own.
i'm just glad you enjoyed reading it..

[Ankur Jain]

stay connected!:D

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe ^_^ OK.