My First Love

They look at me,
Why?
They ask me if i'm ok,
Why?
Just leave me alone.

"Are you ok?"
Do I look ok!
You can't help me!

I can't hold her,
I can't kiss her,
I can't love her,
Why would I be ok!

I felt an eternal love for her,
I felt like we were a king and queen,
meant to be,
That was until she left me.

I see her... and i can't breathe.
Cant you see,
She's destroying me.

She's like a forbidden fruit,
I can't have.
I can't touch.

Please leave me alone.
I know,
I just have to close my eyes,
"Wait, I can't,
She is always on my mind."
She is always there,
The only way is to die,
........Goodbye.

Reviews

[Chenyrene Winchester]

love this :)

[Ashley]

powerful and personal, strong words describing even stronger emotion. very good , could flow a little better between verses

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

haunting ~ devastating foray into the inky shadows after love has abandoned the lover~ poignant in its brevity of lines~