When I See These Words on the Screen

Collaboration by Amber and Brad 2017

(1st Verse)

I can see these words on the screen,

All I can do is close my eyes and dream.

I’m thinking about where you are

This might seem crazy but even though your far..

 

(Chorus)

No matter where you are…

I can’t get you off of my mind..

No matter where you are,

I think about you all the time.

When I see the words on the screen,

You give me something to believe in.

 

I think about how we talk for hours. It’s fancy, seeing your face and flowers. I feel your warm embrace of love. It’s just enough because… (chorus)

 

It reminds me of the little things that you do

To make my heart melt for you

It is not easy finding love

It’s worth it with you no matter what, cause(chorus)

 

Nobody knows our love.

Nobody has to know about us.

They can’t tell us nothing.

It’s all about the love we given, cause (chorus)

 

Bridge:

Lovin you from a distance isn’t easy

But it doesn’t matter

When I see these words on the screen,

I know it's happily ever after (chorus)

 

Reviews

[YoshiPiccollo]

I love that this is a song! I wish that I could hear the music that goes with the lyrics because I believe that it would make the piece that much more beautiful! Absolutely fantastic! One thing to watch out for, though is grammar and single words the flow of the piece. For example, in the first verse, "this might seem crazy but even though your far". "Your" should be "you're" and I would possibly delete the "but"; so it could possibly be- "this might seem crazy even though you're far". All in all, great job!

[ApDunamis]

Thank you. I also appreciate your constructive feedback.