you ask me 2 HELP but how can I if you wont let me???

WATCH OVER YOUR FRIENDS AS IF THEY WERE YOUR BLOOD BROTHERS &SISTERS B/C YOU NEVER KNOW THEY COULD BE GONE TOMORROW AND YOU WILL NEVER KNOW TILL THEIR GONE...

You come crying to me....
tears running faster then a hurricane ..
you say sorry ....
your so very so ...
all i can do is hold you tight against me telling you every thing's going to be ok..
but yet i don't know what the situation is....
so as I'm holding you close...
you finally pull away...
you say i can't help it...
i love the feeling it gives me but I'm killing myself...
Anyssa i need your help...
please...
I'm lost in this situation....
the emotions it brings to me....
the thoughts...
how do i move on???...
i tell you to quit this...
what your doing to your body isn't healthy and it leads to death...
i love you so very much..
your a great friend to me....
and i would be lost without you....
please put down those habits....
let go of the past...
look towards the future...
a guy isn't worth your tears...
your pain...
YOUR LIFE....
if you every need someone I'm right here...
open arms....
even if we are in a fight ..
the biggest there ever can be
my arms are still wide open....

Reviews

[Baby Boy]

Wow! Now this is a very tense and emotional peice right here yet I can feel the love and the heart and you managed to blend it all together! Great job Miss Anyssa. Unique writing this is! I'm feeling it gurl! :) Holla at ya boy!


-JC-

[Forest Green]

Very sweet poem, throughout. Meaningful in that it demonstrates the kind of love that can usually win against the odds.

Good job.

Forest