Short poem

Short poem

A Poem by Kelly B.
"

I feel like this is something that resonates with everyone at some point. Whether it be a one night stand or a rebound or whatever. Thinking that fake love could somehow revive you.

"

We were both so dead inside

Just using each other so we could feel alive.

© 2017 Kelly B.


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I adore short poetry
I love your words

Posted 4 Years Ago


its not even long and i enjoyed this so much...

great read love

Posted 7 Years Ago


Like trying to find something inside through someone else. I've been there. It wasn't fulfilling.

Nice way to put it. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kelly B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
So true... so very true... enjoyed it:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I read your "Tag-Line"about Mondays and had to view some thoughts.

You voice it well and many relate... sometimes our numbness overwhelms the pain but you don't really know until 3 AM.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelly B.

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the read!
Chris

7 Years Ago

anytime...laters.
I love this one. We all have been users at one point or another. Darling.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kelly B.

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on June 9, 2017
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Kelly B.
Kelly B.

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A Poem by Kelly B.



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