Life

Life is  a  true hell
may not be The hell but is
doubtlessly a hell.

Author's Note

My very first attempt at haiku. Please bear with me if any mistakes are made and dont hesitate to correct me. Thanks :)

Reviews

[The dark story]

whao! sounding so much annopyed with your life.

[anxia]

Arent we all at some or other point? :P

[The dark story]

of course we are. i feel like that sometimes as well. but i accuse myself.

[anxia]

If theres anything at which i am so diligent and unrelenting then its self accusation. I understand you.

[Ken Simm.]

A quote by person who knows obviously. Worthy and well written sounds a little dry but it is.

[anxia]

Thank you Ken :)

[Chris]

Your 'touch' filled my thoughts,
and the more I paused I found
...more to pause about.

Some make their own hells
from even the heavens found
by being themselves.

Chris

[anxia]

Thank for the review, Chris. I agree with you.

[Chris]

You made a thought-full work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and a honest view. I like it. There is some paradise to be found too. Just hope more pleasure than pain. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[anxia]

Thank you sir, for the beautiful review and the hope :)

[anxia]

the hope to hope of*

[zainul]

Wonderful work.
Capitalizing 'THE' and 'A' may be avoided if there is no special reason to write that way.
Thanks for sharing the lovely piece.

[anxia]

Thank you sir. I just wanted to emphasize that life may not be the one hell thats ultimate but is one of its kind so i used capitals. if you think it still would convey with out the capitals let me know so i will change the capitals. Thank you sir again.

[zainul]

Thank you Anxia for your nice thought.Yes,I think it conveys the meaning without capitals.
You may find many experts on Haiku and Senryu here in this site.Stella is one very conversant about
such genres.You can enrich yourself as you write and share in WC.
Thank you for your great efforts,dear poet :)

[anxia]

Thank you sir for the advice.

[zainul]

You are always welcome.
Hope to read more poems of you.
Wish you best luck.:)

[Angel]

A Haiku is supposed to be a word picture, painted very precisely...
Five Syllables
Seven Syllables
Five Syllables

You have painted for us the picture of a tortured soul.
Thank you for sharing this.

[anxia]

Thank you Angel for the review :)