FREEZING WARM CHRISTMAS

Freezing winter nights

Snuggled in cozy bed

Christmas lights prancing 

Joyful spirit Booming

Family get together

House like milky way

With people everywhere

Love overflowing

Christmas warmth glowing

shopping spree

out on a cheerful street

Freezing winter nights

Snuggled in cozy bed

Christmas lights prancing 

Joyful spirit Booming.

Author's Note

Merry Christmas!!! Share your thoughts!

Reviews

[Cassie]

How I love the christmas spirit

[Brian]

Very good poem, but I especially like the title! Very creative and I know exactly what you mean by it. Christmas is a cold time of year in terms of weather but with your family around it's warm. At least that's how it should be. I can't say my Christmases are like that but nevertheless, great job!

[anxia]

AW thank you so much for the review , Brian. You got my feelings exactly :)

[Frowerss]

Very good poem ^_^

Now I dont really know if this is right but the lines: Freezing winter nights, snuggled in cozy bed dont sound right to me (may be just me) However wouldn't it sound better like this: Freezing nights, snuggling in cozy beds?

Like I said I dont really know 0_O...

[Maan]

I am reviewing it pretty late but I can still relate to it as the memories of Christmas is still lingering around inside me. This is one nicely expressed poem. :) thanks for refreshing the memories. God bless. .

[Reeti]

I understand that i'm pretty late to review this verse. But, i am giving a review anyway. I have way too many read requests accumulated.

The jubilant mood of the narrator is acutely present. Despite the freezing temperature, the festivities have enthralled everyone. It does stimulate people in reality. If only houses actually looked like the 'milky way'. =)

[anxia]

Thank you Reeti. What matters is your review not how early or how late you have done :). So i am cool. Thanks again!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

very belated, but very nice

[anxia]

Thank you!

[Devanshu Rajput]

Lovely piece about festive season...great usage of words to describe christmas cold days...great writing...

[anxia]

Thanks!

[Danielle]

Lovely and warm! Good work!

[anxia]

thank you shia

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Even with the cold Winter days. Good to be with family and have some fun. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[anxia]

Thank you sir :)

[spiritwind]

I love the Christmas spirit
especially yours
revelling in family
and all those merry merry lights blinking
in a house like Milky Way
I loved the repetition of the 1st and last stanza
I loved the good cheer in your soul
and I thank you for passing it on to me

[anxia]

haw your review is truly warm! thank you spirit wind :)