Blessed

so tomorrow i am turning 20 and i was ruminating on my past and this came out!!!

Me  : You are with me when i am down

        You warm me in your arms when its cold

God: You are my little girl no matter the seasons.

Me : When i accused you there you stood still,

       with out the slightest drift in your love or your smile

God: You are my little girl no matter if you go awry.

Me : You are there always

       even when i am miles away from you

God: You are my little girl no matter the farther.

Me : My false charges wont prevail

       nor the distance created by me

       You know that i'd come back to you for eternity

       cause you are eternal so is your love,peace and presence.

Me : I am glad that you are in my life,  

       that you have chosen me, 

       That you have made me your own!

God:You are my little girl no matter how old you grow.

 

Author's Note

Please feel free!Oh this convo is between me and god:)

Reviews

[mandy]

i loved this! i and many others can relate to this i think. isn't it great to be so loved, unconditionally? i loved the dialogue style..

[anxia]

Yes its more than great to be loved unconditionally!!! I am glad you loved it.Thank you so much for the review :)

[Sirius King]

very nice, i love the conversation :-)

[anxia]

Thanks Serenus :)

[Sirius King]

np :-)

[Shubham's View]

The highlight of the read would be the exchange of dialogue and since I cannot find any feedforwards to offer, it is simply too good. Looking forward to more such work.

[anxia]

Thank you, Shubham.

[the_stoic]

good that you have faith in god and what's nice about this write is the way you have penned it down in a one on one conversation. This is your first write that i have read and you seem to be a promising writer ! keep it up ..

[anxia]

Aww thank you soo much, Stoic. I do hope you enjoy my other work too :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Good to hold faith close and be content. I like the set-up of the poem and the repetition. Thank you for sharing the beautiful poetry.
Coyote

[anxia]

Thank you, Coyote its a pleasure to have a review from you :) I am glad you liked it!

[Abby Abramowitz]

I feel you are more in your heart and keep it. I enjoyed this poem.

[anxia]

Thank you, Abby:)

[Pratik]

Spiritual and inspiring! The dialogue sometimes stuck the flow....I would have loved a different ending though! The structure is plain... But it's different from what I usually read! So good effort!

[anxia]

Thank you, Aaran. I too felt that the flow iwasnt free at parts but then i wrote this in about less than 10 minutes.So i left it raw and from the heart. Thank you for your review :)

[Mia]

This is lovely Anxia :)

[anxia]

Thank you, Mia :)

[Kate W]

Anxia this reads much better - well done x

[anxia]

Thanks to you,Kate,its your helpful review.

[Kushal]

Good write. However there is this huge sense of confusion intertwined in this poem. Needs more detailing of the characters in it. :) :)

[anxia]

Edited.Thanks for your valuable comment!

[Kushal]

Much Much Better. :) :)