After you

When you never let it go... It never leaves you too but nature heals!

Many things happened even after you,
Seasons changed ;
Day & night never stopped,
I'm breathing ;
Beats to my heart never stopped,
But you were floating in me like a feeling...
Unstoppable ;
Your beating heart kept my words vibrating,
Ohh... yes you were unstoppable.

Maybe this should've happened the other way round,
Like the sweet rain water converts to salty,
Or like the sun, moon & stars should've fallen down ;
But this affected only me... Why!?!

The tough stone inside me would've never broken while sleeping,
If the quite trees should've soaked the burning noon ashes ;
I should've scribbled all the trees, rocks & diary notes with poems after you!
The painted walls... I might fill them with graffiti... That you aren't coming for me.

But.. But.. But all of that could happen when you aren't there... Only after you ;
Yeah...It's possible only after you...!

Reviews

[Sandy]

Awesome poem!!!🥰🥰
Mind blowing and heart touching!!!! 🥺🥺
You are an outstanding writer !! I must say.. and those lines "beats to my heart never stopped ..." So good man!!! 😉😉😍
Keep going !!!😌😌
I am waiting for a new poem!!!!🥰

[Siddharth Sharma]

समझने की चाहत मे कोशिश कर समझ तो आया
मगर �™व्जो के इस समा मे बे�™व्ज़ मै इस खातून की तारीफ भी ना कर पाया।
हमारी इसी गुस्ताखी को ही अपनी खिध्मत समझ �™ेना, जिसके जाने के गम मे तुम जो इतनी मायुस बैठी हो, उसके जरा होने की वजह को ही अपनी मुस्कुराहट समझ �™ेना।
आशा करते है, इस मुस्कुराहट के पीछे की वजह कभी गुम ना हो, और अगर हो तो कम से कम उसकी वजह हम ना हो।

Truely a sensational piece of work.

[John the Baptist]

Very rich imagery well employed here. The impression is that the speaker has discovered there are more than one fish in the sea.

[Ayan choradia]

A awesome poem by a fantastic writer
#keepgoing