When Wishes Come True

I wished for a smile, that would last forever

I wished for a love, that was more than true

I wished for life, that no-one ever lived

And that was when God made you

Reviews

[Celtic]

Wow, this's a great stuff here with that i'm just done now. you know what i'm still workin' on my new story & this's quite same thinkin'..i'm really very surprised. I loved your this stuff much, i even can't explain in my words...because i've no words to say something on this one, but i want to say that if you'll write or continue it then you can notify me because i want to read more about this stuff.
you thinking is deep, & deep thinking always comes from analysation, i've seen here one more thing that you dropped here your much effort too alon' with this stuff.
wow, i really appreciated it. well, done & keep writin' i want to give you my 95/100...
great job by you...

[Akshat♥]

I wish your wish to come true soon ;)
if you believe in your wishes they will definitely come true one day:)
Keep writing!!

[Anusha Prabhu]

Lol...Thank you Ashu!

[Gaurav Walia]

Beautiful...

[cevance]

Very sweet. Short and to the point.

[Just Kim]

amazing writing here

[Anusha Prabhu]

Thankyou so much

[zainul]

Brilliant work.

[Zoya]

hm.... nice.... good work .... i liked it...