What is going on in this world?

What is going on in this world?

Why are people giving each other pain?

And why am I the only one

who is wondering in vain

There are millions humans

but there is no humanity

People's heart has gone stoned

and there is no space for sympathy

I really wonder a world 

where we human help each other

instead of giving torture

and help this world go a little smother

Revenge and hatred destroyed it all

No humanity and love exists

The kind heart that I used to know

They all have became dismissed

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

rhythmically very deep & quite thoughtful work here. the choice of words's captivating. how true it's sayin' that humanity's being lost into the ashes of gone-winds, & no cloud can revert it back to the earth at all. nice work here!