ThE VeNeTiAn FaNtAsY

Everybody wants to go to VeNiCe!! This poem also takes a guitarist to the Venetian Fantasy and the feast to his eyes of the lovely city.

THE VENETIAN FANTASY!!

My Eyelids Were Drooping

My Focus was blurring,

Bam! I was Floating

Never had Felt such Soothing,

My Eyes were Fast Closed

But I realise I had not Dozed,

As I Muse Where I am Now 

Someone Greets me with a 'Ciao", 

Shocked, I Flick my Eyes Open

So does my Mouth Gape Open

For What I was Witnessing was a Stunner,

A Place Where Just Everything is Finer!!

The Turquoise Road of Venice Lies

Before me Like a Miracle in Guise,

And it gets a lot Better

As I Feel a Rock-a-Bye Baby Jitter

Looks like Am Couching on a Gondola

Lying by my side is a Viola,

I Feel my Musical Nerves tingle

Readying to Brew up a Jingle,

I Wanted the Viola in my Hands Badly

For I Would sing About Venice Gladly,

Whose Would it be?, I Start to Wonder

Will He Lemme Have a Shot at it? I Ponder,

"Fire Away With the Bass, Signor..", I Hear

Seems someone at back Had Noticed my Desire,

I Glance back and see a smiling Gondolier

Who nods at me and tosses me a Ginger Beer,

Here comes my calling to Bring an Outpour

All About My Dreamland's Folklore,

I Take the Viola in my Hands

To Prove My Worth with this Chance,

I smile At the Romantic Couple before my Sight

Enjoying Smooches under the Bridge Of Sighs!!!

Their love had me mesmerised but motivated

And thus, a drive inside joyfully kickstarted,

All of a sudden, something was not right

The feel annoyed me like a Flea Bite,

Why were the couple giving me a Glare?

For heaven's sake, why did they Stare?,

Maybe the guy assumed I was

Wooing his girl with a pass

Aimed straight at her from here

That for sure,he cannot bear,

Poof!! Vroom!! Shucks!!

The place around me Dissolved,

And I was Blinking stupidly At my Professor

Standing lankily before me with a Daggers Look,

Oops!! I must have been Dreaming, as usual

For such things, in classes, are very casual 

"Out!!", He roared, in a furious voice

I Left the Classroom with a Puppy Face,

Once Outside, My heart gave a delightful Leap

As I had a perky Tune from under Deep,

The Musical Chords were Still ringing

Within me, Lub n Dub, thus singing,

My dream did bail out on me

Today, leading me astray, But

This Tune was Going into my Record

As Soon as I dash Off the Road,

One day, at the summit, not very far

I shall stand proud with my guitar,

Till then, it is my time, during when

Songs shall be woven from HEAVEN!!!

Reviews

[Patrick O'Neil]

Very nicely, set out. Lile that it has a twist in the tale.The rhyme was also very good. Really fun dream to have, and dream songs do tend to linger. Great write.

[kaywrites]

Thanx a lot :).. http://theavantgardescribbler.blogspot.in/ - My blog link, take a look wen free. I write articles too.

[Patrick O'Neil]

Will do. Thanks