A Drop of Wine

A Drop of Wine

A Poem by Anuj kaushik

The day was called off from the college
and we arrived at the discotheque to get a sip of solace.
counting started but forgot to cease
when booze let me get down to knees.
we danced, we sung and we enjoyed better
the level of intoxication to come up later.
eyes closed and I was in the heaven, 
relished the dance of beautiful maven.
still the booze was going on, 
celestial dancers were stepping in 
and I was not able to step on.
Someone was calling me I thought, 
some more went in and some more I sought.    
Then I got to swim at cloud nine
when I met with the last drop of wine.

© 2015 Anuj kaushik


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This poem is amazing, in that it's so simple yet it speaks so loudly. It's wonderfully written as well, I love the words you use- they make it truly come to life. "Celestial dancers were stepping in", that's good. I wish I knew how you took something so normal and simple and made it so powerful. You did good, keep doing what you're doing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Anuj kaushik

9 Years Ago

Thank you ...i just started writing...I like your true reviews that you give to every writing....you.. read more
MFrano1

9 Years Ago

Sure thing, write more so I can post more reviews because I quite honestly love your stuff!

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Rohtak, Haryana, India



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