Resurrection!!

Droplets of your love,

Trespassed on my heart,

Splashed & filled it,

Like a vast cold sea.

And the charm of your caressing waves,

Splendidly, took over me.

 

Alas, the fence of my emotions,

Couldn’t hold the emerging storm,

Lapsing the miracle of a gentle soul kiss.

And I, hoping to savor the swim,

Drowned in the deep dark abyss.

 

Like a lost soul,

Measuring the depth of water, alone,

And amidst of the darkness,

A lustrous ray touched the sea stone.

It was you, my love,

Bringing me back to breath,

Resurrected and adored me,

By abolishing the kiss of death...

 

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

I hope he appreciated this. Or is this random thoughts? Beautiful words anyway.

[Anuja Sharma]

Just some random thoughts, well relatable for someone, may be!!
Thank you for reading MJ.😊😊

[M. J. Smith]

My pleasure. They are beautiful words. You are most welcome, my friend.

[Betty Hermelee]

I believe the the emerging storm is the essence of your changing mood, perhaps it was the relationship that took you down to the dark abyss….but alas your love was resurrected…….it is very spiritual, very well written poem
Best
Betty

[Anuja Sharma]

You caught the context right there Betty

[Betty Hermelee]

Glad that I did
Best
B.😊

[barleygirl]

Becuz of your title word, I came to your poem with a Christian mindset, so I couldn't help reading this as if the lover, the savior, is God, or whatever manifestation of the divine one prefers. I do feel there's a stormy love relationship, as you describe with vivid imagery, between most people & their divine entity. Or your imagery could also represent the tug-of-war with the divine within ourselves. All this is conjured up by your words (((HUGS)))

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you margie. Really grateful for the review.
Stay connected, keep reading.

[Paul Bell]

Like this poem, you allow the reader into the conversation.
Water and love, they sort of crash together bringing the night alive.

[Just Kim]

Emotional read here, nicely written and presented

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you so much Kim. ☺