Like a Butterfly!!

Carrying an enchanted iridescence with her,

Flying to shimmer the globe.

Like a butterfly,

Undaunted and full of hope.

 

She is hard to catch,

Yet needs sunbeam to shine,

Be gentle with her,

Her feelings are so intertwined.

 

She bears a creeping pain,

From crawling to rise high above.

Indeed, she is mystically beautiful.

Yet so craving for your nectar of love.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Anu… Butterflies 🦋 are angels where dreams are delivered to the Creator…. Amen

[Anuja Sharma]

Thanks Patricia for your lovely review.

[Chris Shaw]

Butterflies are both fragile, beautiful and fleeting. On occasions there are members of the human species who can touch you in the same way. A delight to read.

Chris

[Anuja Sharma]

Very much agree with your review. Thankyou Chris. Can't be more happy that you stopped by.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

"I almost wish we were butterflies and liv'd but three summer days - three such days with you I could fill with more delight than fifty common years could ever contain." John Keats.

You two could do a collaboration this poem of yours is so beautiful. The imagery still plays in my mind. Tyfs

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you so much Cyprian.
This comment is really so touching. You made my day.😊😊

[Betty Hermelee]

What a poignant poem, like an allegory with a butterfly, so gentle and shimmering. As one would be gentle with a butterfly, one must be gentle with a person in pain, wanting more in her life, perhaps;
but hopeful still the same. Lovely
Best, Betty

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you so much Betty for stopping by.
Have a wonderful day!!
😊😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You as well!