Her very first Love!!

Clouded by emotions,

Lost in the sunshine.

Refused to fathom her euphoric senses,

Feelings all intertwine.

Hoping to saw him for just once,

Loving him to be loved.

Heart beat getting faster,

And the word seems to be shrugged.

Carrying an ocean in her heart,

Gathering all courage-couldn't wait.

Love tides getting high,

And she was drowning gradually-impassionate.

What on earth was happening,

Was she losing her mind.

The aphorism was hard to understand,

All undefined.

Apart from everything-he was all above.

Indeed, 

It was her very first Love!!

Reviews

[X]

Ah, yes, what a lyrical way to describe the pangs of pain and ecstasy falling for and longing for the beloved...be still my heart...:) I enjoy your writes...

[Anuja Sharma]

Hey, Kira. Thank you very much for this valuable review!!

[X]

Likewise :)

[Chris]

This left a soft smile in its wake as the emotions resurfaced and walked the shoreline again. Soft and oh-so-subtle scents come to mind...warm summer eves... moonlight and gentle dreams.

[Anuja Sharma]

And those chattering butterflies, romantic sky & the heart pounding high. Thanks for the read!

[Levi Levin]

A romantic and great piece indeed. Great work!

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you Levi for your time to read this effort & giving valuable comment.

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

"Carrying an ocean in her heart" is such a powerful line, its perspective gives a refraction of other beauties of this write and line. Wonderful poem and theme. Tyfs

[Anuja Sharma]

Yeah, that moment and feeling is hard to describe. Yet, it was just a try to pen it down to words.
Thank you for your valuable review. ☺

[Lacey Sue]

Was this for a certain person or did you send a read request to me or everyone

[Anuja Sharma]

Oh, this is what I believe everyone must have felt for once. (Speaking generally)
☺

[Lacey Sue]

Yes thank you finally people get it.

[Gaurav]

yes the beauty and freshness of first love...the way we get lost in day dreams and euphoric ridicule...it all is a happy place to bet...yet dangerous...beautiful write

[Anuja Sharma]

Exactly. Only time when you want to control your mind but loses ability.

Thank you gaurav for the review!!