My Weakness..!!

In the End It's "HIM & I...!!"

I shouldn't miss u,
But a single call from u is my weakness!
I shouldn't scribble for u,
But ur single thought is my weakness!
I shouldn't be closer to u,
But ur fragrance is my weakness!
I shouldn't plan to see u,
But ur slightest smile is my weakness!
I shouldn't caress u,
But ur gentle touch is my weakness!
I shouldn't be with u,
But the amorous embrace of ur arms is my weakness!
No, I can't let u go & make this imagination faded,
Coz u r my weakness!!

Reviews

[Lady_benny]

This is good. I love the pattern it follows

[Gaurav]

a deep thought put in simple words..good one

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you Gaurav!!

[Ashwin Shanker]

I shouldn't be praising you,
but not writing a great review has become my weakness

I shouldn't be saying I had felt once what you have written now
But speaking the truth has become my weakness

I shouldn't be giving you a 100/100
But appreciating good poetry is my weakness ;)

Great work

[Anuja Sharma]

I shouldn't be applauding your review,
But thanking you is my weakness....;)

Thanks alot Dear Ashwin:)

[Ashwin Shanker]

Welcome ;)