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I seriously need to start naming these poems! anyhow, this is a fragment of a thought

I would like to pay homage to your eyes
to the murky browns of faith
that twinkle hiding secrets many would dream to find

I would like to pay homage to your smile,
that endearing crescent tug of lip
prettier than all the tulips and daffodils
in their morning splendour adorned with dew..... :)

Reviews

[nathan]

Thank you Neva

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Secrets I Dream to Find...........so lovely!

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[Sleepless]

there you go so put it ! as the title 1:)

[nathan]

How about just, unforgettable

[Sleepless]

lol well if you insist ! :p go with unforgettable beauty ?:)

[nathan]

This was for a friend of mine... Cmon Brenda, u mst hv a couple of ideas

[Sleepless]

reallly beautiful well ima bad at tittle so i am not sure if i will give a correct one:)