IS IT A MISTAKE by Ace

Being reasonable!

I haven't reach that secret

I have been longing  for  it.

Is it a mistake that your in a relationship,

And perhaps you didn't wanna be in one.

Is it a mistake that I'm not talking to you or 

Is it a mistake your not talking to me.

I think about things,and then ask you

 DO YOU THINK ABOUT ME SOMETIMES?

when you sleep,

when you see me, 

when I walk your way,

when I speak around you

It's almost as if I can hear you say

BOY,COME BACK TO ME!

Is it A Mistake that you just keep crossing my path

and just how does that happen every time even when 

I stay far,far away from you.

Is it A Mistake for me to leave, and unforgivably never

take you back or have you come across my life,but that

wouldn't work cause you just can't go away.

I notice your plan for you to stick to me like glue,and keep

your eye on the prize,which is me.

I know what you  see, cause it's what I see
But true say, the mistake I didn't make is a choice and Now I have to

understand why I made that choice.

Posted by ACE at 10:59 PM

Reviews

[marytownsend]

I love the last line, it speaks volumes on its own! This is nicely written and shows depth and meaning!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to know a mistake. Usually we learn too late to run or escape. I like the statements in the poem. We can create a prison of paradise and hell at the same time. I did like the ending.
"But true say, the mistake I didn't make is a choice and Now I have to
understand why I made that choice."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Virtuosa X]

I like this. So relatable.
Good job!!

[kayla]

Well written and descriptive with emotion, but many grammar errors. Anyhoo, overall, really good(: