Pretty Little WORLD ( a poetry collaboration with Virtuosa)

We are close friends to think of doing something like this just make me wanna never stop writing poetry>Best wishes to my Friend Virtuosa!!!!!

Ace_

It's cold as ice in this pretty little world

The Race is on in this pretty little world

The gays are on this pretty little world

To like what goes on in this pretty little world

Hey, why don't you ask those pretty little girls?

Like What goes on in this pretty little world

 

Virtuosa_

In this pretty ltitle world of ours

Things are fake that should be real

Things are broken that should be intact

But this pretty little world

It swirls still like the wrong isn't & never was

 

We're friends, we're not

In this pretty little world

You know me, you know me not

In this pretty little world

You ran, I got shot

In this pretty little world

Im dead, you don't know that

In this pretty little world

 

Ace_

Devotion is throne in this pretty little world

No man is safe in this pretty little world

What goes around comes back around in this pretty little world

I ask the men of this pretty world

What goes on in this pretty little world

(MEN)

It's cold as ice in this pretty little world

We scrap for ours in this pretty little world

Rape goes on in this pretty little world

the Gays march forth in this pretty little world

The girls are in their own pretty little world

Hey, and speaking of girls, why didn't you ask them.................?

What doesn't go on in this pretty little world

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good flow of words and thoughts. You two did a very good job expressing thoughts and view in the poem. The world can seen odd sometimes. I like the use of the term "Pretty little world." Gave life and purpose to the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[ACE A SPAZE]

Thanks I'm sorry for being late on the comment thou I find myself on and off this just caught up in basketball but Coyote thanx these poem mean a lot to me if you want you can share some ideas with me May God bless!

[marytownsend]

I like the easy flow of this and the reality of seeing the world as it is now. It also looks like it could be easily set to music if you wanted to do so. Nicely written!!