Throw a Punch

haha i just wrote whatever. it just came out without evening thinking. ho-ho-ho. my favourite type of writing.

 

i want to punch
punch you
punch through
punch a few
a few b******s
maybe knock them out
knock them out their idiotic status
what's the status quo?
a f*****g s**t band
a f*****g s**t time
time to spare 
time to care
care about nothing
nothing cares about you
and so do i
we see eye to eye
eye to mind
your eye goes to your dick
you're sick
that's the crunch line
i want to punch you in the spine





 

 

Reviews

[Michael]

It read well and really holds one's interest throughout. Think about adding a second stanza, no lover than a couplet, that asks an ironic question, something like "why do I put up with your crap?" by doing so, it will make it more personal to the reader. Just an idea as I think it fine the way it is.

cheers