can't let go

Pain and suffering
Love let go
These feelings are smothering
They drain me slow

Where love was once found
We have disgraced
We turned our home
Into a miserable place.

I got to mad and you never let go
The love we had we refused to let grow

Your gaurd was up
And for good reason to
I fucked up
I mistreated you.

Now i scared you away
And it hurts me so
I died today
I just couldn't let go

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like this poem.
"Now i scared you away
And it hurts me so
I died today
I just couldn't let go"
The above lines are true for many. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lostnstars]

I love this piece so much and I love the flow through the lines :)

[FateDictates]

this has all the great components of a great piece and I loved the easy rhyming flow that feels like it gets lost later on.. do some more work on it - or not..I love it..