Fox

In the dusk the sun emulates her aura through

The clouds but quickly it drops clean from the sky

In despair as it fails to capture her beauty

Author's Note

Original posting of this work found at my weblog.
http://livingdocument.wordpress.com/

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

You pack a lot of vivid imagery into your short poems. That is not easy to do. Great job!

[TONY]

Thanks, I will have more coming, hope you like!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I like the shorter reads you convey...taking the least amount and describing the moment...

[TONY]

Quality not quantity :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You got that right...less is more...