Your Creation

Before you is the creation of a man in which you chose to make you took the man I once was tore him part as if he was a child's play toy then took parts of him and replaced them but instead of using his old parts you took his warm heart and replaced it with a broken and battered one you took his kindness and replaced it something so awful the devil himself wouldn't know what to call it you took his confidence and you gave him weakness you took his blood and replaced it with nothing but pure evil so that not only does his blood but also his heart beats the same hate and evil as the devils then you took this creation and gave him life in the beginning everything was fine you were able to control and use this creation how ever you saw fit but the minute your creation discovered the potential it held within you became afraid you told him that you didn't know if you wanted it around you told it that you couldn't love it nor could you care for it and even though you chose not to care for your creation it somehow could hate and destroy everything in this world but it could not harm you and no not because it didn't have the ability to but because some where inside him he could do anything but hate you

© 2016 Anthony Mitchell

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Samantha Anabella

I can tell you wanted to use your own style but the problem is some of your readers can not understand what you are saying or trying to point out.
Your readers may not understand your structure in which they can not see what you see. Next time when you create your own style act like your a reader who has never seen it before so you can understand our perspective and we can understand yours.
Other wise, Id say keep writing! And if you ever get the chance check out my writing, thanks! Welcome to Writers Cafe!