Two and A Half Law

Two and A Half Law

A Poem by Anthonio Joshua
"

Love is giving. Giving... is hurting...

"

What would you expect from this very life?

 

Too many comes with disappointment...

 

Too many are hurt...

 

"I've given my all! Why didn't they appreciate me?"

 

"Why? Why? No one understands me..."

 

"Why doesn't she love me the way i love her?"

 

...

 

"LIFE IS NOT FAIR!"

 

Well, here's the secret...

 

Life is INDEED not fair...

 

You give them two, they give you none in return...

As the result, you are cut in half...

 

You give her four pieces of your love... She give back only two, one, or worse... None at all...

As the result, your heart is broken in half...

 

You're willingly give a hundred percent of your effort, the world didn't care...

Mercilessly, you failed.

Same as before, you're cut in half...

 

 

This is Two and a Half Law.

 

 

You give them two, they give you none, you're broken in half...

 

True?

 

WRONG!

 

This is the True Two and a Half Law!

 

You give them two, they give back none!

It's okay! Give them one more as a bonus!

 

You give her all your love, she give back none!

It's okay! Give her more and more of you!

 

You give two, you received none, but you give them a half more than what you give earlier...

 

Does it hurt?

 

Hell yes, it does...

 

But that's the way love works.

 

 

Right?

© 2015 Anthonio Joshua


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I think your right on with this I personally know what it is like to love and not be loved back.Too many times this happens in life so real and painful and you feel nobody understands how we feel I enjoyed reading it nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

Sure does and He is the reason for the season
Anthonio Joshua

9 Years Ago

Yes, indeed!
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

God bless keep up the good work

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Added on January 3, 2015
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Anthonio Joshua
Anthonio Joshua

Bandung, West Java, Indonesia



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