Rhythm

Rhythm

A Poem by Anthonio Joshua
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They say, before going on a relationship, you have to enjoy yourself first... Here's a poem about that... About a girl who had her rhythm already, before she opened up and accepted love...

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...

 

There she goes...

 

Walking, in one colorful rhythmic sensation!

 

Breathe in, breathe out...

 

Smart, she's choosing the path...

 

Wings attached, every step comes alive!

 

 

Waving, waving...

Her hands' waving orchestra-like...

 

"Up!", she said.

And the tune goes higher!

 

"Hold!", she said.

And The Mother catches her breath!

 

 

...

 

There she goes again...

 

Eyes closed, heart wide open...

 

Blowing, blowing away with the wind...

 

 

In awe, he watches...

In love, she stops...

 

Eyes open...

 

A smile!

Carved with the fingers of five!

 

"Wanna come...?"

 

 

...

 

There they go...

 

Hand in hand, heart in heart...

 

Intertwined, one they become!

 

...

 

Now...

 

Every life stands in watch...

 

Happy, their feet tip and tap!

 

Absorbed, in the rhythm of love!

© 2014 Anthonio Joshua


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Happy, their feet tip and tap! I believe you meant happily though it is a good description of love passion is what writing is all about keep on writing. An idea take an object any object or even an emotion and write down various phrases that you think describe it and then piece them together in a rhythem. Say a circle for example,continues without end,goes round and round,will it ever end?Perhaps when it falls to the ground.We can create emotions with the simplest things all we need is passion to write never lose it keep on writing.Just my two cents worth to maybe assist you God bless

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

Not a problem Anthonio my belief is we should help one another and always try to bring out the best .. read more
Anthonio Joshua

9 Years Ago

God bless you more, W.R Stowe!
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

He has I woke up this morning



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Happy, their feet tip and tap! I believe you meant happily though it is a good description of love passion is what writing is all about keep on writing. An idea take an object any object or even an emotion and write down various phrases that you think describe it and then piece them together in a rhythem. Say a circle for example,continues without end,goes round and round,will it ever end?Perhaps when it falls to the ground.We can create emotions with the simplest things all we need is passion to write never lose it keep on writing.Just my two cents worth to maybe assist you God bless

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

Not a problem Anthonio my belief is we should help one another and always try to bring out the best .. read more
Anthonio Joshua

9 Years Ago

God bless you more, W.R Stowe!
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

He has I woke up this morning

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Added on September 26, 2014
Last Updated on September 26, 2014
Tags: Boy, Girl, Love, Rhythm, Relationship

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Anthonio Joshua
Anthonio Joshua

Bandung, West Java, Indonesia



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