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A Book by ansley2408
© 2013 ansley2408
Author's Note
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Any feedback on my general style, too much detail?
Thoughts as a first chapter of a book?
Feedback on my use of semicolon and colon if usage incorrect.
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Added on July 21, 2013
Last Updated on July 21, 2013
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ansley2408North West, United Kingdom
About
I'm a relative beginner to this, mainly writing fiction at the moment. I welcome all feedback and reviews especially with regards to my style, and also grammar, which I am a little unsure of. more..
Writing
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