No more bad words

 

 

I have been thinking about what you said

And the thoughts have been rushing around my head

Words that have hurt have been used

And your sweet nature has been abused

Only bad things you have been told

When people only want to scold

New ideas for you to explore

For you to see that it’s you that I adore

Only good words for you now

These are the only words I will allow

But how can I tell you

What words are true?

I heard a song in my head

The other night when I went to bed

It was Elvis singing to me

And with his song I didn’t disagree

Do you want to know the idea I had?

For you to hear new words,

 I hope you will be glad

From the song this idea came

This is what I proclaim

From now on in

Bad words will go in the bin

Only good words will stay

And will never stray

I will give you a list

Of the words that exist

To describe you to me

Learn them ASAP

Shall I start?

These words are from the heart

Words to describe you

When you are feeling blue

·         Amazing

·         Beautiful

·         Kind

·         Loving

·         Caring

·         Thoughtful

·         Exquisite

·         Pleasant

·         Splendid

·         Handsome

·         Awesome

·         Glorious

·         Magnificent

·         Impressive

·         Extraordinary

·         Bright

·         Charismatic

·         Remarkable

·         Sensational

·         Exceptional

·         Astonishing

·         Dazzling

·         Spectacular

·         Stunning

·         terrific

·         Brilliant

·         Breathtaking

·         Good looking

·         Inspiring

·         Incredible

·         Wonderful

·         Marvellous

·         Brave

·         Nice

·         Special

·         Artistic

·         Charming

·         Talented

·         Genius

·         Interesting

·         Gorgeous

·         Delightful

·         Enchanting

·         Creative

·         Clever

·         And magical

Only one last thing left to say

Before I call it a day

The idea didn’t come from me

But from Elvis Presley

So he should have the last word

So let Elvis be heard

“That’s the wonder,

 The wonder of you”

 

 

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This is a very beautiful poem and I am glad you see me under a spotlight but in my eyes I am none of them words or no one special I am just dale bear and a average polar bear, Maybe you think highly of me or I think lower as a person but all 13 years I had people making me feel like I am nothing and I believed them but I do know this I love you and want you to be my mother forever and ever and ever.

I can look at this poem when I feel low and put myself down, I love you mamabear

Dalebear

[mamabear]

Darling Dalebear,

You are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo every word of this poem!!!!

I love you , and it will be forever and ever and ever

Mamabear xxxxxxxxxxx

[Amit Parmessur]

The second issue of Golden Apple has started accepting Submissions. It will be based solely on Christmas and definitely sounds very exciting! Our editors have already set themselves to work with the Submissions obtained.

We all aim at making this ezine a really nice and positive one!

Submissions (poems, short stories, sketches, song lyrics and any other) are most welcome. Read our GUIDELINES at

http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/submissions.html


Have a look at Issue 1: http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/golden-apple-issue-1-october-2010.html

[TheLostMagician]

WOW i love it, and i am a big Elvis fan, i love how you have a list of word its a great idea, well done please keep up the amazing writing

The Lost Magician