My Dear Not So Old Dad

My Dear Not So Old Dad

A Poem by mamabear

They day you went away

All I could do was pray

Heaven a good man had gained

I was totally drained

I was still a child

It made me go wild

I couldn’t understand what had happened

My heart was so dampened

How could God take away my Dad?

This made me so mad

You were always my hero Dad

And since than I have been sad

I dream of where you now are

Please leave the door ajar

And let me have a peek

And see the mystique

I could see you

Do you want me to?

I could see your new house

I would be as quiet as a mouse

You wouldn’t know I was there

Do you think I should dare?

Heaven looks so enchanted

Your life I took for granted

The day your soul was to disappear

I lost more than a tear

I will never forget you

And whenever I feel blue

I think of my first love

I thank the stars above

For my dear not so old Dad

I will take out my writing pad

I will leave a message for you

About our love so true

I was always a Daddy’s girl

I will write a poem for you, I’ll give it a whirl

But where can I start?

To explain what’s in my heart

And how could it end?

You were a true friend

And a wonderful man

My life had only just began

When goodbye I had to say

Even though I wanted to say stay!

My Daddy you have always been

And God was so mean

He took my Daddy away from me

And set your soul free

Daddy, you I always miss

I just want one more kiss

And a hug

To have that feeling again would be like having a designer drug

I’ve missed you every second of every day

Since you went away

© 2010 mamabear


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This is a beautiful heartfelt poem..... everywhere you go he there watching you he must be so special but we don't forget them when the have gone. And they will always be in our hearts. One thing we know is our secret to. He always will be that star in the sky watching you from above and proud of you

Keep up writing

Love

Dalebear

xoxo

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is a beautiful heartfelt poem..... everywhere you go he there watching you he must be so special but we don't forget them when the have gone. And they will always be in our hearts. One thing we know is our secret to. He always will be that star in the sky watching you from above and proud of you

Keep up writing

Love

Dalebear

xoxo

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW, its amazing it made me cry reading this, he much ment so much to you, i love this piece of writing, i wish he was still with you, well done please keep up the writing

The Lost Magician

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 18, 2010
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mamabear
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Birmingham, United Kingdom



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