My gift of a Mummy

I held your hand

As you passed from this world to the next

My daddy came for you that morning

He did not stay too long

He just waited for you to be ready

And then together you both left

Now I have to spend my life without you

The pain of losing you is still strong

I do not think it will ever pass

But when I revisit the pain

I know how much I love you

And I will never forget!

From the day we met I loved you

They all made the right decision

From Social Services who took me from an unfit mother

And the courts decided I could be your daughter

And gave me the gift of a family

The gift of a mummy and a daddy

You turned a b*****d child

Into your loved and wanted daughter

You taught me right from wrong

You gave me a code to live by

I learnt to hold my head up high

Even when things are bad

Just because I grew in your heart

And not under it

I was no less your daughter

You taught me the type of mother

I wanted to be

Without you I would not be me

I owe you my life

You saved me from a life without love

You gave me a reason to live

You are my real mummy

The other was just an egg donor

Delivering me to you

Thank you for all my memories

And despite all your worry

You did a good job

I turned out alright in the end

And I’m here to say to you

Thank you and I love you

Sleep well my mummy

Till we meet again

Reviews

[TheLostMagician]

that was so heartfelt, amazing and like all your poems so beautiful and full emotion, well done please keep up the writing

The Lost Magician

[Matthew Kult]

Beautiful, and heartfelt. Abslolutely amazing write and a better read.

With Love,

Jaidyn

This is such heart-felt piece! Its very soul-touching and renders the reader with a sense of both empathy and admiration for the writer. Great job and kudos to you for revisiting your past and reaching out to the child you were, the child who no doubt still lives inside of you!

[Dalebear]

She be looking down at you from heaven, so proud of you.

That bright star up in the sky
I think it was a touching and amazing write well done

Dalebear x

[Wolf Cub]

She would be so proud of you, seeing how far you have come

i like how it shows raw emotions, please keep writing, im looking forward to seeing more :)

Wolf xx