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fun write for Coffee Poetry competition

Aint no ' t' in coffee..............You couldn't have had.....The Boston Coffee Party.......Nor could you wear short sleeved coffee-shirts in summer.......And coming to a Coffee-junction is just plain daft - almost as as daft as  a rampaging Coffee-ranasuarus Rex........But when the sun has  peeked o'er the horizon and the morning paper's vellichor fills the air, there's no room for Tea ...then...only hot rich coffee will do.........That's c.o.f.f.e.e.   ~ aint no 't' in coffee yo !!gl

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Fun piece and coffee rules. Nice.

[Leon C]

I love it.
You caught me off guard with the title, so it was a delight to read in and get the joke.
I liked your formatting as well.

I'm sure you are familiar with Rizzle Kicks so check out a couple of their songs. Miss Cigarette and Earl Grey (I think).

Well done

[Kathryn Smith]

I like this! and I had to laugh because my father randomly knocked on my door last Sunday and was like...are you in bed? I told him I was but he opened the door and handed me a cup of coffee. "Here, have this. Don't spill it." and left. :P What a guy! XD

[Solar]

A poem that makes this reader 'Wake up and smell it'!

'the morning paper's vellichor' is such a clever line - implying that the morning news has already become musty, wistfully so and it is the coffee that makes everything fresh. I 'll drink to that!

[Great Aunt Astri]

And it is a fun read! Lighthearted.

[andrew mitchell]

clever tongue in cheek anto, cheers on coffee's aromas minus the t

[KWP]

funny that after having made so many thougsands of coffee's for other people in my lifetime - coffee I drink no more - give me a tea - with a capital T oh please oh please oh please

in fact I have just discovered a most delicious cardamom herbal tea - my newest most refreshing fave

what a cheeky humourous write - I am so glad to see a new poem from you Mr!

Happy New Year my friend - muchos muchos love X

[wordman]

and i just brewed a pot and drinking a cup now ! heres to ya mate

[iand63]

"And that's why yall drink coffee" I've got Alex Harvey running through my head now haha. Are you going, are you going to the tea party. As a devout tea belly ..... how dare you sir! haha. Nice one Anto

[Lydia Shutter]

Loved this....clever, cute, and tongue in cheek. A unique write, Anto....very good! Lydi**