In-continent pen

In-continent pen

A Poem by ANTO
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Hate is another facet of love; don't look for the splinter in someone's eye when there is a plank in your own. -anto (survivor of the Troll wars)

"
shouting at the wind
wasting all his energy 
he should know better

© 2015 ANTO


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ANTO
captcha: sphygmic (of the pulse)

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Insightful write Anto , loved this write! and the author's notes

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And it's hard to be heard over the wind when it is that loud. Very nicely done. Thanks,

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Gee
This is my working life in 12 words....love the splinter,plank bit(you've probably got a name for "bit")LADEEEEEZ AND GENTLEMENNNNNNNNNNN,IN THE BLUE CORNER WEIGHING,WELL,WEIGHING HEAVILY ON THE NERVES OF ALL.....TK MAXXXXXXXXXX,AND IN THE RED CORNER WEIGHING HEAVILY ON OUR HEARTS AND MINDS(in a very good way)ANTO,"SURVIVOR OF THE TROLL WARS" BENEDICTUS ALI..........ANTO,ANTO,ANTO,ANTO,ANTO,ANTO,ANTO,ANTO.........You then enter the arena,green hotpants,boxing gloves made from feather dusters,boots borrowed from alladin,a hat made from four leaf clover to the soundtrack from the wizard of Oz....whatdyathink ??? My reviews are a wee bit more in depth these days,would you agree old bean..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

hahaha lol
ANTO

9 Years Ago

Gee - if I didn't know you better I'd say you were out of your tree when you wrote this one. But fec.. read more
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Let them waste their breath until they're blue in the face...great senryu, Anto.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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He should but he won't is a phrase oft heard by my shell likes (especially when they are trying to convince me to their moral incentives haha)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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the wind blows the ink right back into our face...smeared blue tears.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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But we never know better Anto; it's in the programming; but just imagine if it wasn't, mankind would die out within a few generations.

Beccy. x

Posted 9 Years Ago


Better than pissing in the wind. :))) T

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great little senryu, Anto!

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