In-continent pen

In-continent pen

A Poem by ANTO
"

Hate is another facet of love; don't look for the splinter in someone's eye when there is a plank in your own. -anto (survivor of the Troll wars)

"
shouting at the wind
wasting all his energy 
he should know better

© 2015 ANTO


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ANTO
captcha: sphygmic (of the pulse)

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Anto, even if you don't believe me, your writing makes me think lol. I like this three line poem. About its meaning: All I can say is that we want to fight and yell at somethings to get over with it, but yet we somehow come to fight with things that are out of our league... like the wind, who in the world would fight the wind? Like seriously lol. But I guess it means that we sometimes get mad at things that are worth it... the part he should know better really gets me because it makes me think, we get mad a things that aren't worth it, but yet we know better that we're not going to win anything with them, so why do we keep fighting for something like that? lol. Yeah you know me, I view stuff at A LOT of point of views, so yeah there's that and it's good to see you again! Well, I haven't come quite a lot here but I'm kind of back, I'm seeing where I have more success, here on in other website.
Great poem as always Anto (trying to make my reviews longer ) This is really good stuff. Going to my favorites.
Rating: 100 (Like if I would put something else lol)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Surrendering to anger is the first step to insanity. This is it what you call small but full of flavor. Thank you for sharing.


Insight.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A good way to use up excess energy and to get rid of hatred. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just posted a quote of mine from my MSc. thesis on a social site and based on that single quote a troll popped up. He was slow to perish under the might of my pen, but upon being vanquished and as I watched his demise I noted: is this what the Internet is for?

He wasted his breath and energy, but also drained mine.

:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


needed your note to understand your meaning in this one ..thought it was about when we create "messes" trying too hard to squeeze out a creative droplet or two ;)
but i love what you are saying ...thankfully i have not had the unpleasant experience of "trolls" ...and a waste it is ... one should use such committed energy towards something positive and we would all benefit .. jealousy and hate are corruptors to the core .. i think your response is a great way to handle such things .. the bold type emphasizes your to the point strong statement .. nice one! hope your troll has stumbled and broken a nose or two :)
E.


Posted 9 Years Ago


ha - well yeah - indeed - layers lie in the simplicity here - and yes - sometimes it is all a waste of energy and breath because others are unequipped to be heard - yup, yup, yup - ahhh - and on the exhale .... LOVE X

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hello again from across the way,

Sometimes we find ourselves in relationships and situations that we know better than to be....yet, we remain for whatever misguided reason our minds and hearts try to convince us of.

I speak from personal experience and it's not easy to leave...

Thanks for sharing this one with us out here.

From somewhere, in the middle of the deep, blue Pacific....

Alisa ;-)



Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice write... short but to the point. Sometimes when it feels like life is spiraling out control this is what happens. Survivor of the trolls... that was awesome haha :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tangent Time! We all have those moments of wanting to vent~maybe we shouldn't...?
Thanks for sharing!
Insight into the real world.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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