Why do i do everything wrong?

Wrote this 2 years ago...:)

Why do i do everything wrong?

When everything is going good,

I spoil everyone's mood

When everyone is glad,

I make them sad

I fought with many people

I lied to many people

I can't control my anger

And start pointing my middle finger

Some people helped me

But I didn't see their helpful manner

Instead I laughed at them like a joker

I didn't want to hurt other people

But somehow i ended up hurting many people

Sorry is not enough I know

But I want all those people to know

That I admit I was wrong

And I'm really SORRY!

Author's Note

How is it?

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

try to increase the font size..
it will look better then...
poem is excellent ...work on your structure formation more precise ..
sometimes in life...it happens with most of us that people take us in a wrong way..
our intention is always right..but experience always counts..
we can rely on that..
Overall a nice poem...keep writing!!! :)

[anonymous101]

thnx a lot....:D

[Akshat♥]

you are always welcome dear:)

[Key The bard]

i agree with Akshat♥, the content is good you just need to work on the structure a bit more, i found myself trying to read through it too quickly; but witen in a diferent style i could see this being a very good poem, with alot of powerfull lines. good luck

[anonymous101]

hmm...i will try harder next time..^_^