Enter Debra Nickerson, the clientA Chapter by Yaseen J MalikThe fourth chapter of the Black Widow novel4 It was eleven o'clock in the
morning and Shaw was still feeling the after effects of the night before, he
had downed seven cups of noodles and four cups of coffee and yet the taste of
Roses tea still lingered on the roof of his mouth. “Excuse me mam, another coffee
please.” Shaw politely asked the attractive waitress passing by his table on
the deck of an outdoor café downtown. Hopefully the eighth cup would be the charm. He
prayed, pulling out his phone and scrolling down to his notes. Name: Debra Nickerson Married three years Personal info: Three kids, house
in the suburbs, suspects infidelity with husband. Shaw didn’t need the money as
much as he needed to get his mind on something else, he needed something easy,
and what could be easier than an unfaithful husband in the suburbs. “Here you
go, one coffee.” The waitress greeted, her tone a bit more friendly than usual,
causing Shaw to look over his police shades and notice how beautiful she was.
“If you need anything else I’ll be over by the booth over there.” She smiled seductively clenching the menu at her side tighter as he quickly turned and
walked away. Shaw wondered if he had enough time for the waitress and the
meeting with Nickelson but in the end he gave way to professionalism. Shaw chose places like open
dinners and public, well crowded places to meet his potential clients. Though most private investigators meet in the
security of their offices Shaw liked to watch his clients in their natural
habitat. That brief moment after they exit the car and they sweep the room for
Shaw, he would watch them. He believed that by the time the potential client
actually came up to him, he would have already decided on whether or not he was
going to take the case. Debra Nickleson was no exception. She pulled up in a red minivan, a
small slender woman in her early thirties emerged. Shaw watched her carefully
as she made her way up the stairs and into the outdoor coffee shop counter. She
walked without confidence, and an uncertainty that reflected the inner doubt she had about even showing up, her clothes were plain and her hair was tied into
a tight bun, her large knockoff bag, clutched tightly under her arm and as she
made a sweep of the room for Shaw she continued to walk deeper and deeper
into the shop rather than staying at the counter. Shaw chuckled to himself; he
would take the case. “Excuse me sir, I'm sorry to
bother you, but are you Damien Shaw?” she asked him, her high-pitched mouse
like voice matching the rest of the mental picture he had put together. “Why yes I am, please have a
seat.” He gestured her to sit which she did rather quickly. She sat for a
second before darting her focus behind her and once more sweeping the room, her
caution and sheepish demeanor intensifying her reaction to every sound. “Are you alright mam?”
Shaw asked slightly concerned as he removed his shades and placed them into his
jacket pocket. “You don’t think we could do this
in your office?” she asked her eyes darting from him to the couple behind him,
then to the waitress, then to the table. “Please relax Misses Nicolson. As
far as the outside world knows we are just two ordinary people sharing a cup of
coffee.” His words made Ms. Nicolson snort in disbelief as he clutched her
purse tightly. “I’ve never done anything like
this before, how do I know…” “How do you know this isn’t some
sort of scam?” Shaw finished for her. Ms. Nicolson nodded sheepishly as she
looked around the room once more. “I suppose there’s really no way to fully
convince you. What are the names of your three boys?” Shaw asked taking a sip
of his coffee. “Mikky Jr., James, and Taylor,
How did you know I had three boys?” “The same way I know that Mikky Jr.
plays soccer, and that you husband doesn’t let you go anywhere without him
except for the weekly drives to practice and school drop offs.” Shaw finished,
puckering his lips as he looked at the coffee realizing that the awful tea
taste still remained. “Who are you? How do you know all
of those things?” she asked her sheepish voice pitching slightly higher as she
clutched her bag tighter on her lap. “Please Ms. Nicolson I'm not
gonna hurt you, I'm here to help.” Shaw comforted her as he gestured to one of
the waitresses for another coffee. “Have you been watching me?” she
whispered. “Yes man, from the time you
exited your car from the time you sat down at the table.” “But that was only five minutes!”
she exclaimed with astonishment. “I inferred you had three boys by
watching you; you plain attire speaks of fatigue, three boys can be a handful.
Hair tied in a bun, over aging, worry marks under your eyes are all subtle
signs that the three children you have are all abnormally active boys,” He related, making Ms. Nicolson
become over self-conscious. “But what about my husband and
the soccer games, How did you know about that stuff?” she asked as she picked
up the freshly brought coffee up and began to sip its dark liquid. “that took a little more
observation on my part; the way you hold yourself, sheepish and small tells me
that you're not fearful, you're just used to being spoken for, he would decide
when and where you ate and socialized, always monitored, never alone. It would
make sense that since he had no knowledge of this meeting that you would feel a
little naked without him. The fact that this behavior seemed so familiar to you
speaks to how long you have been with Mikky, I'm assuming right out of high
school?” “Um…yes,” she managed. “Then it was just a good guess
that Mikky Jr. was the first born, a guy like Mikky sounds like the type of
person that would name his first be after himself. The fact that Little Milky
played soccer was as obvious as looking at your car and the soccer bumper
stickers.” He finished leaving his client speechless. “So what now?” she managed still
blown away at Shaw’s display of deductive reasoning. Shaw half smiled realizing
that his little show had took its effect. He leaned forward. “We talk about your husband, I
need to know who he is, where he works, why you think he'd skip out on such a
beautiful woman like you.” He pressing the record bottom in his recorder app
and placing his phone on the table. The bashful Ms. Nicolson blushed as she
smiled and suddenly got serious. “If my husband ever finds out…” “Your husband will never find
out, my job does not require that we ever meet face to face. “Shaw reassured.
“So Ms. Nicolson, tell me your story.” © 2013 Yaseen J Malik |
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