F**K SOCIETY

Sometimes i feel like i cannot be myself
That i'll be critized if i do something wrong
So I keep doing nothing
And I lose opportunities that will not come back.

Why I am so shy?
So stupid to do not do what i want?
Then, I realize that whatever we do,
We will be judged,
So I decided to stop caring about others' opinion
And start being myself again.

Author's Note

Please, tell me what do yo u think! I'll be very happy to know all of your opinions
and continue trying and improving. And sorry for english mistakes, i'm spanish so my
english level is not as high as I would like!

Reviews

[Serena Monteleone]

The title of this is what compelled me to read it, and I thought that i was going to be really angry, but then I started reading and I feel likes it almost giving a cry for help. I think this is something that a lot of people feel, which is what makes it really connectable, because I know that I have felt this way many times. This is really great and I think your emotions come out in writing like this so I suggest you write more like this!

[anonimouss]

Oh, i don't want anybody to be angry for the title it's just to say we have to ignore everybody's opinion and do what we like we do without depending of others opinion;) Oh yes, I think it is a good way to express myself:) Thaaank you so much! I really appreciated it!

[Serena Monteleone]

The title didnt make me angry, I just figured it be an angry poem! I really enjoyed reading it though!

[anonimouss]

Oh sorry:) I'm happy to know it though. You are amazing!

[Serena Monteleone]

no you are! trust me!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Your English is okay. Even better than other people that I know. :) Keep on writing and put more imagery and figurative language to your poems and you'll reach places. :)

[anonimouss]

Do you think so? I'm spanish and i'm only 13 years old! This means a lot to me! Thank you so much, and if you see an english mistake, tell me please! Thank you for your opinion!!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I was curious about the title. HAHA. Anyway, this is nice. I'm struggling with the same problem. I know lots of people can relate to this. More power!

[anonimouss]

Hahahaha it's just like i don't like society's idea of beauty or how do you have to behave,etc.. Too superficial! Yes, i know that a lot of people can feel related to this! Thank you for your opinion!